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Dec 11, 2010

Intros and Act I

Posting my rough bullshit-y plot rambles for zombie comic. What it says on the tin, this post is the intros and the first act.

 
Intros (Act 0)
            Raph’s
                        Raph’s at desk, probably looking exhausted
                        Nurse gives him coffee tells him about patient waiting for him
                        Patient changes into zombie and ragekills things
                        They try to evac the hospital
                        Raph heads back to apartment and Azzer           
            Lou’s
                        Orderly/male nurse walks into his bar
                        Talks about the crazy shit that went down at the hospital
                        Lou leaves to talk to Ashy on the phone
                        When he returns, the guy has changed
                        Lou thankfully keeps a shotgun behind the bar
            Xi’s
                        Xi wakes up in a hospital bed, pretty much abandoned behind a 
                       locked door
                        He probably tries to call for a nurse or something, though
                        knowing him he might just get up
                        Wanders out of his room and finds zombies
                        Wonders vaguely if he’s in Silent Hill but realizes he hasn’t 
                       smothered his wife
                        Probably finds this zombie thing pretty cool

Act I
            Lou is leading a group of survivors (including Ophelia/the chick)
            Lou mentions the church (vaguely) as “somewhere safe”
            Running through city/slums
            Almost to church when they get jumped
            Several survivors get mauled/killed/dragged off
            Leads to them running and getting cornered
            Zombie in front = boom headshot
            Pan up to silhouette of man on roof of church w/ rifle
            “Thank god for British bastards”
            Zombies offed
            Survivors run to chuch
            Door is locked
                        W - “What’s the password?”
                        L - “I come bearing women and booze”
                        W – “There’s a good man” – door opens- “Now quick, everyone 
                       inside”
            Break
            Lou sits down – “I was worried you hadn’t made it, Will”
            Brief discussion of situation
            One of the survivors starts to moan and grip his head, sweating
            Will approaches and examines the man, telling the others to move back
            He moves the man’s shirt aside to show a bite mark
            Will draws a pistol and presses it to the man’s forehead
            He fires, several girls scream, most of the survivors seem horrified
                        W – “Bastard was already dead, he just didn’t know it yet” – 
                       turns to look at the others – “Look, any of you get bitten, don’t 
                       keep it to yourselves, that’s a good way to get everyone killed. 
                       Just do yourself and all of us a favor and give the nearest gun 
                       blowjob, alright?” – walks back over to Lou who is giving him 
                       look – “What?”
                        L – “….we really need to work on your speeches, little buddy” – 
                       offers Will a bottle
                        W – takes a drink – “Any ideas where we’re gonna go? This 
                       church isn’t a fortress and there’s not enough food to support 
                       anyone for long”
            Discussion of where they’ll go from there
            Break
            Leaving the church
            A few of the survivors decide to go off on their own
            Will, Lou + Ophelia venture off, looking for shelter (possibly w/ others?)
 

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